June 29, 2017 at 10:23 am
Visual feedback – looks effective as an online book. the cover supports the genre of the narrative and also adds to the narrative genre: intrigue, suspicions and mystery. The journey you have taken with the front cover demonstrates how you tried to entice the reader with interesting images – shows lateral thinking. the photo shop skills are competent
The writing is outstanding – a fine balance between fact and fiction in the traditions of In Cold Blood. Pulling on many of the crime genre conventions, you have written the reader into a world, depicting both place and characters vividly. The structure is a triumph, word choice outstanding, use of speech/dialogue very effective. A confidently developed idea and thoroughly researched, backed by a range of solid research and findings. The references to and reflections on the developments of the writing and how other writers have impacted on your writing is well articulated, analysed and detailed. Your evaluations are confident, honest and demonstrates a clear independence and personal style. Your work is audience specific and consistent to the proposal, aims and ideas. It is a triumph and was joy to read.
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